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Prosecutors have charged a Metropolitan Police officer with murder after he shot rapper Chris Kaba in London last year.
minus-squarePolar@lemmy.calinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down8·1 年前In school you learn to keep titles short. You added a lot of filler words that can ruin the headline on apps that cut them off, or printed media. Shot dead is correct.
minus-squareDarkDreamer13@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up11·edit-21 年前“fatally shot” is the same amount of words and less confusing
minus-squarenudny ekscentryk@szmer.infolinkfedilinkarrow-up8arrow-down1·1 年前“shot dead” is a phrasel verb, therefore it can (I would argue in this particular context it should) be split: shot (whom?) dead. I shot him dead He shot his wife dead Cop shot unarmed black man dead (including press-specific omitting of articles because English is stupid)
minus-squaregravitas_deficiency@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6arrow-down2·edit-21 年前And yet, we wouldn’t be having this discussion if the wording was actually unambiguous. I removed one word and added two. That’s not “a lot of filler words”.
In school you learn to keep titles short. You added a lot of filler words that can ruin the headline on apps that cut them off, or printed media.
Shot dead is correct.
“fatally shot” is the same amount of words and less confusing
“shot dead” is a phrasel verb, therefore it can (I would argue in this particular context it should) be split:
shot (whom?) dead.
I shot him dead
He shot his wife dead
Cop shot unarmed black man dead (including press-specific omitting of articles because English is stupid)
And yet, we wouldn’t be having this discussion if the wording was actually unambiguous.
I removed one word and added two. That’s not “a lot of filler words”.