Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 个月前When people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneexternal-linkmessage-square20fedilinkarrow-up1312arrow-down111
arrow-up1301arrow-down1external-linkWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 个月前message-square20fedilink
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down13·edit-22 个月前Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-22 个月前Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·2 个月前So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down3·edit-22 个月前Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.